SECOND CUT - Trailer

Feedback from our first draft aided us in making adjustments to our trailer. They were:

• Muffled sound and at some points the recorded dialogue was much louder or some were even too quiet. This variation in sound mean that the audience couldn't completely engage with the trailer because of the dipping and amplified sound. 
• Secondly, the news reporter. We were told that she didn't exactly look 'professional' because of all the jewelry she wore and the fact that we couldn't see her tau-so, although she was stood up. We were also critiqued on the image and the positioning of it. After re-doing this section we were still told that it didn't quite replicate a proper news report, as a result we will be re-doing this section. 
• From the previous trailer we were also told that our fight section was too long and very unrealistic due to the prop used (a gun with an orange nib). Therefore, we shortened the scene to just over a second which showed an aggressive push performed in slow motion. Adapting this shot meant that we conformed to the conventions of an action trailer as we had a variety of effects and quick shots. 
• Our targeted audience informed us that they understood what the trailer was about,but they wanted it to be clearer. As a result we added in extra dialogue at the end "INSERT QUOTE". Our feedback stated that, including this dialogue made all of the action of the trailer make sense and this just enhanced it.